TOPIC: Describe someone in your life who you have special memories of.
This can be a person who has passed away or who is still alive.
Top Tips:
* Write a plan. you'll need an introduction, 2 or three main points (with their own paragraph) and a conclusion
* Use your senses. What did this person look like? Sound like? Smell like?
* Proof-read your work and ask a friend or family member to take a look.
* Go over the self-assessment and fix up anything that needs fixing.
I have answered the question and stayed on topic
I have used paragraphs to separate out my main ideas
I have used interesting/expressive language
I have proofread my work and checked spelling and punctuation
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